Огонь по цветам да, но на мой взгляд не хватает огня в глазах... ну и может в улыбке, например Хотя тут, конечно, зависит от человека, которому предназначено.
It's beautiful! Very well done. It's simple yet very complex. I think you could have done a bit more with the shading on the face (particularly with the hair and forehead) but it still looks very nice.
I think you could have done a bit more with the shading on the face (particularly with the hair and forehead) but it still looks very nice.